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Basic
Original
These days, there are many people who intend to move to the country sides while the population rate with the city is still much higher.
With the Basic service, minor grammar and vocabulary problems have been fixed. Although a more native style could be achieved with our Native editing service, the paragraph is still correct.
Revised
These days, because the population density in the city is high, there are many people who intend to move to the country-side.
Native
Original
Many people have minds from city to rural. Therefore more people have intersts of moving to rural. I have a expectation for rural life too. Then, let's know the lifes in the city and rural
With the Native service, this paragraph is re-worked to achieve a native style. An introductory sentence is added to help with the flow of the paragraph. Awkward sentences have been deleted, but the ideas are used to make new sentences.
Revised
Choosing where to live can be a tough decision. Some people prefer the city; whereas, others prefer the country. I prefer living in the country, so I will examine the pros and cons of these two living arrangements to explain my choice.
